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Sleeping Beauty

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A shy greeting to everybody. This week we have an unusual release, "Sleeping Beauty" by me, Crazyla.

A. gave me the opportunity to write this post too, so, uhm... this doujin is my attempt to portray a sweet family moment, but I tried to include some fun too, since, as those who have chatted with me know, I can't go too long without telling a joke. You'll also find a character that is often ignored but I love to bits making her appearance in the family dynamic.

I wish you a good reading and hope you'll enjoy. ^.^

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Doujin by Crazyla.

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First to comment!!
Finally release! I've been raping my F5 button for this! :D
THANKS FOR THE RELEASE! THIS IS SUPER-MEGA-DE-DUPER-ULTRA-AWESOME!

Be honoured, crazy. First time commenting on a doujin! ;)

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Awesome awesome AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so amazing and beautiful Crazyla-Sensei!!!
Congrats!!! It's so cute and cool!!! X3

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@Maddy: I'm very much honoured *takes a bow*, and I'll pray for your f5 button, I wish it a fast recovery after such abuse. =P

@Bard: Thank you!!! I'm happy you like it, cute was one of my objectives! XD

I'm smiling like a fool, being able share this with you all is incredible. I wish I could be there to see you when you read it.

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Let's see, it's nice, enjoyable, cute, and has

Spoiler:
Cake

What more can a guy ask for

Q: Where am I?
A: Everywhere.

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Lol, the sweetness caught you. ;)
I knew that was the way. XD

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I love it, that was so sweeeet ! Both ways !
Perfect picture of the Takamachi family !
Your drawings are very nice and expressive and...dunno...I feel the love <3
Great job ! :)

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Nyamo! Thank you, I put all my love for them in it. I wanted to portray how, even if they can get "angry" at one another over silly matters in their daly life, they all still love each other very much.

And, well, I think drawings should add something to the story that writing can't, so that's what I tried to do. Like Nanoha's pouting face, I was surprised about that one, turned out better than I thought I could, scary and cute. =^.^=

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YAY!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! You're very talented, I see~! Your story and your art are such strong qualities of an artist. I know now I won't be disappointed, okay? ;)

I can't wait to read this!!! Excellent job! You deserve an applause! *applauds* x3

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Again thanks for this nice doujin Crazyla!
Don't listen to some hater.
Doujins should be entertaining and yours is.

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@Heart- thank you for the vote of confidence, I hope you enjoy it and I won't disappoint.

@Shiroaka- I have though skin and a talent at ignoring non-constructive criticism coming from faceless flamers. If I could give you a minute of fun, then I'm happy. =^.^=

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Oh my gee, I admire you, Crazyla. You're awesome ;-;
Congrats and keep with the good work. I'll look forward your future djs ^^

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Thanks kkattapiya, I don't know when (or even if) I'll make another one, for now I want to go back to fanfiction. But I had a lot of fun doing this, I love reading doujins and I like the style doujins are written in too, so I tried to do something similar to them, and in the end it was incredibly satisfying. ^.^

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Thanks for this nice, sweet doujin, Crazyla ! :3

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Thanks ^^

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Thank you Crazyla for your doujin. It's funny and sweet XD I lol'ed at the last page.
Congrats and keep up the good work :D

Thanks to depression76 for the Signature XD

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Once again, thank you all for your support. Knowing you enjoyed it is the greatest reward for me.

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That was so perfect, i laughed all the way thru it, please do another one, it was sooooo good, keep up the good work

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LOL, Nanoha as the evil witch!? Uh oh that's one fairy tale which won't end with happily ever after XP. So in the end the "Sleeping Beauty" who save the day huh.

Arf you pervy wolf! Change place with me! But it's nice to see her with the family. That poor familiar really way too put in the bus since Strikers. Though to be fair a lot other too notably absent X<

Great story Crazyla, there's a few places where the artwork a bit weird to be honest but the sweetness and humor more than enough to make up for that ^^
Looking forward for your next work.
BTW why Fate slept on the couch to begin with? Punishment from her waifu?

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Eh, Vivio thought that her Nanoha-mama takes Fate and "hides her away", doesn't let others come too close to her, rules the house, and uses pink rays of magical doom on whoever attacks her... That's totally evil witch material, right there!

I know, I still have some problems drawing children, so Vivio looks weird sometimes, and I should pay more attention to proportions as I still screw them up here and there. And there are some angles from which I just can't seem to be able to draw.

Practice makes perfect, though, so maybe ditto526's wish will be fulfilled. (d^.°)

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This is awesome!!! Thank you very much for bringing this doujin to life! And sorry for that all I can really say because I'm still quite speechless after read this doujin hehe

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Wow!!! Awesome doujin!! I can feel a lot of love around Takamachi's house.

Evil witch!!? Hahahahaha .... Vivio you are taking risk, aren't you?

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That was a great one!
Thank you very much :)

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Thank you for your sweet Doujin, Crazyla. :)

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That was absolutely precious. I think your art was actually some of the better I've seen in doujins, although the backgrounds (or lack thereof in some panels) could use some work.

Please do more, ok?

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You're an awful liar for saying the art was that good, but thank you, I'm really flattered. ^^

About the backgrounds, there are some panels in which I tried really hard to put something (like the bookcase behind vivio in the first page) but other times I just didn't know how to fill up that empty space, or I focused so much on the characters that I ended up simply forgetting about it. In any case you raise a good point, I need to do some research on that. OTL
I'll try harder next time if there will be one.

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Wow, I feel so mean for not having commented sooner TT.TT sorry, buddy >.> *bows* but, i LUVED ur doujin. it was sweet =3 *nods* funny~ cute~ *sighs* wat else could make a nanofate fan happy? *gives crazyla a box of pocky* kudos. u'r great =3


When I'm bored... :/

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This doujin is so sweet and cute! Well done Crazyla!

The puppy Arf on the bed is sooo adorable! The Vivio on page 6, upper left panel is the most MOE <333 I also really like the sleeping Nanoha on page 8, and Fate-chan reaching out her hand on page 7. Of course, the Nanoha x Fate kiss on page 4 is the best!

Looking forward to more doujins from you.

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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So funny all most woke everyone else up :D I mange not to laugh