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[Fanfic] The Alone Star.

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--------------------------------------------The Alone Star-----------------------------------------

Author Note : Well as I Read a lot of manga and I listen to violin music I’ve been inspired.
Well I know right, I also need to finish Strange Event and Amnesy. I already know all the rest of the stories in my mind so don’t mind much about it.
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The Alone Star is based on the fact that Nanoha is a very Famous but Alone Star. Somes event will happen in her life make it change.

Note :
The First song is Chelsea Girl by Tamura Yukari,
The Violin song is Shadows by Lindsey Stirling.

Here the Story begin.
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Fate’s POV. :

“Do you know? White Devil is in concert today!” said some voices.

Fate was walking in a Park to go at hospital visit her mother, Precia, who was very sick. She stopped when she heard of the “White Devil”.
White Devil was a singer, a very famous singer. Fate always heard of her but she has never seen her on the T.V. or in concert, since she wasn’t really interested.

“-Don’t you think she is incredibly beautiful? Aahh I admire her so much…”

“-Yes.. I’ll go to the concert! I love her performances.”

Ever and ever Fate heard speak of this singer, not knowing much of her.

When she arrived at hospital, she headed to the room 125, which was the room of her mother. She knocked on the doors and heard the usual “Come In” of her mom.
She entered the room, and seen Precia watching T.V.
Fate didn’t pay much attention of the T.V, and greeted her mother.

“-How are you today, okaa-san?”

Precia faced Fate and smiled, responding:

“Pretty fine, and as you see I got nothing better, but watch the T.V.”

It was the pub when she took a look to the T.V.

She looked back to mother and asked: “Did doctors say something about your illness?”

Fate’s Mom looked at her legs, answering: “Apparently, I won’t be able to walk again…”
She turned her look over the windows to look what was going on outside, and she sighed.
“Ironic, isn’t it? Two month ago, I walked like those kids, but I think, I’m making too old now…”

Fate felt sad, as she couldn’t say anything. But she suddenly felt, her mother’s hand patting her head while saying: “But its fine, I’m going well, even if sometimes it hurt a little” and she gave a big smile to her daughter, like she was saying “anything is ok, you shouldn’t mind about this”.
Fate couldn’t hold to let a smile tears falling of her eyes when she saw this big smile.

“Now go Fate, I’m sure you got business to do, like do papers or help to your work.”

Fate did what Precia told her and she bowed to say good bye to her. As she was heading to the exit, she heard a beautiful voice that came from the T.V, but she didn’t though more about this voice.

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Time was passing and Fate was still hearing of this White Devil, this famous singer. She though “What does this woman have, to be this famous? Maybe I should go to one of her concert.”

And… She bough a premium entry ticket for White Devil’s concert at the Tokyo Dome.
“Uuh.. Wow, She might be really famous to perform a concert at Tokyo Dome.”

The Day of the concert as finally came, and Fate had a VIP place because of her ticket.
Yes. Testarossa Family was a rich family, and Fate was the second daughter of the family. She had one big sister who died in some strange events.
Lights were switched off, and scene lights started with the entrance music.
“Glorious Entry of the singer, uh.? Let’s see if this entire rumours about her, are rights.”

White Devil come on stage she looked really happy.
Fate was a little shocked when she saw her, and though that she had seen her before somewhere.

“Hello all, How are you today??” She shouted.

The public answered still shouting “Fine!!”
“Ok! Theeen… Music, Start!”

The first music she sang was really nice, and enjoyed.
Well she almost sang all the music she had but at the end she said responding to public wanting “another”

“Hummm, I got a surprised for you, but first I’ll tell you how I started my carrier!”

Public said “Yaaaaaaaaay ! Go White Devil!”

“Well, At the first I wasn’t a singer at all, I was used to play violin…”
“As I though… I have seen her playing violin, but where?”

“I loved Violin, and a day my professor said me to try to sing on one of my music. I accepted and did what he offered me to do. A producer wanted me to sing more and found out I had a big talent to sing. And I became singer. But now for the last song I would like to play the last song I wrote.”
Not waiting for the public to answer a security man gave to White Devil a Violin and she started to play.”

“I know this song, long time ago, someone played it for me…”

The end of the concert came and, Fate was really satisfied, but has a weird feeling in the chest. Her heart was burning wanting to know more about the White Devil.
She ran through the corridors, stopped to ask to a security man where was located the singer room, and continued her way.
When she finally arrived to the room, she arranged her hair, her clothes… and then knocked on the door.

“Yes, May I know what this is for?”

Fate didn’t say anything; she just waited for the singer to open her door, backed against the wall, with the arms crossed. When the door opened, Fate just bowed to salute the singer.

“Fa—te ?” White devil said opening chocked eyes.

To be continued…


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Nice start. Is the "White Devil" wearing a mask or something like that? Can't wait to find out more~

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Well the "White Devil" isn't wearing mask or anythings ^^


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really interesting!hope you do more~

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Looks interesting, curious to see what happens next.

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Anyways, I would like to take your curiosity on White Devil Last word. She says "Fa--te ?", of what Fate she talk ? Fate, the Fate ? or maybe both ? ah ah ;) I'll let you tell me of what Fate you think x)


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.......Fate.....fa-te.....I think she just met "her fate"/! >-< like in "destyny"

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Ah Ah maybe, but I'll post the next chapter tomorrow since I am writing the Final Chapter of strange events right now. I am trying to make it long as the three ones before weren't really developped. Hope you won't be too impatient lol x).


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NANOHA-SAMA! MORE PLEASE! ~Sincerely Fate-sama <33

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hehehe :D You know I got an entire chapter waiting to be tip on computer and posted there :D I'll upload it soon~~


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